[fischermans]

Only my guitar and me.

https://soundcloud.com/a-fisch-1/back-home-on-the-road

63 Back Home on the Road     März 2014

Verse 1
I was a stranger
far away from home
I have seen in many faces
and I ran that many races
I live alongside the road

chorus
Don´t know what is wrong with me
don´t know why I always wanne be free
don´t know how many homes I´ve  had
I´m back home on the road
I´m back home on the road
I´m back home on the road

Verse 2
I dream from freedom
dream of a better world
I dream my dreams alone
far away the wind has blown
into the blue blue sky

chorus
Don´t know what is wrong with me

Verse 3
I don´t know if I ever reach the end
glistering far away in the sky
I hope it´s not that high
may I ever touch the sky
may I ever be free may ever find me

chorus
Don´t know what is wrong with me
don´t know why I always wanne be free
don´t know how many homes I´ve  had
I´m back home on the road
I´m back home on the road
Lalalalalalalala
Lalalalalalalala

[mickeytwonames]

I like your voice quality - far away but here! For my taste the song needs some dynamic variation and I'm not sure that the intro is right for what follows but good tone and strumming.

[fischermans]

@mickeytwonames
Thank you for your words.I´m also not sure because the intro but let us hear what others think about.

[Boydie]

This is not my favourite of yours

Probably not helped by the fact I had recently listened to your other track yesterday, which I loved

There are some nice open chords in there but I found the melodies a little predictable

[Viscount Cramer & His Orchestra]

Now, I liked this song and found the melody good with a strong chorus.
In the background, my wife said "That's the best I've heard today" so you've got a fan there.

Nice strumming and good vocal delivery.

[benjo]

 hey fish

 love this your voice really suits it
 and the story being back home on the road so simple
 but very real this really was a song that I took to
 loved the lyrics and lovely melody you had

 great job a really nice song here for me well done

[Neil C]

Alex,
Nice intro. Straightforward tune which suits your style well. Well recorded with good balance between vocal and guitar.
 
Neil   

[montydog]

Great economical lyrics - it's simple and direct and the guitar is a perfect partner.

"Don´t know what is wrong with me
don´t know why I always wanne be free
don´t know how many homes I´ve  had
I´m back home on the road"

That just sums it up so clearly and directly.

I don't think the intro was right for the rest of the song.

Otherwise, another slice of class.

M

[fischermans]

@Boydie
The melodies are predictable because I want to make it easy for you. Thank you again.
@cramer1930
Thank you and tell our wife she made my day.Also thanks to her.
@benjo
Thank you.Makes me happy.
@Neil C
Thank you very much.
@Alan
Don´t know how I can say thank you for all your friendly comments.
Alexander