[darigako]

"Hedonism"
This song is about those people who have sleep over with strangers and stuff like that.
Just a draft though. Would like some feedback or something

That girl is a mess
She's naked, no dress
That guy isn't wise
He thinks he's in paradise
But no, oh oh oh oh, no oh oh oh oh....

Skin without bones
Eyes without a soul
Is that what you want baby?
What you want baby?
Body without blood
Heart without love
Is that what you need, honey?
What you need, honey?

[hardtwistmusic]

"Hedonism"
This song is about those people who have sleep over with strangers and stuff like that.
Just a draft though. Would like some feedback or something

That girl is a mess
She's naked, no dress
That guy isn't wise
He thinks he's in paradise
But no, oh oh oh oh, no oh oh oh oh....

Skin without bones
Eyes without a soul
Is that what you want baby?
What you want baby?
Body without blood
Heart without love
Is that what you need, honey?
What you need, honey?

I like it.  One tiny suggestion. 

Instead of "Eyes without a soul"  think about "Eyes with no soul."   Just seemed to "catch" and not quite flow the original way. 

Good to meet you btw.

[darigako]

"Hedonism"
This song is about those people who have sleep over with strangers and stuff like that.
Just a draft though. Would like some feedback or something

That girl is a mess
She's naked, no dress
That guy isn't wise
He thinks he's in paradise
But no, oh oh oh oh, no oh oh oh oh....

Skin without bones
Eyes without a soul
Is that what you want baby?
What you want baby?
Body without blood
Heart without love
Is that what you need, honey?
What you need, honey?

I like it.  One tiny suggestion. 

Instead of "Eyes without a soul"  think about "Eyes with no soul."   Just seemed to "catch" and not quite flow the original way. 

Good to meet you btw.

Thank you
and thanks for the suggestion, it sounds much better that way indeed