once full of gloss
you were the highschool star
breaking teenage hearts
now you're no loss
I 'google' expressions when I'm not sure if you could use them like I intend to. Can a person or a life be "full of gloss"? I'm aware that, even if the phrase would be acceptable, 'gloss' has a negative connotation. I put it in because of the rhyme, of course. The chorus I'm having in mind continues:
once the big boss
now wretched and pitiful,
old, and laughable
you are no loss
I'm writing about old age and dying, as you may have guessed. It's not going to be a nice song...
Bernd