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lightspeed182

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« on: July 28, 2009, 05:34:00 PM »
Rights for your mind - listen here

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« Last Edit: July 28, 2009, 07:43:20 PM by tone »

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« Reply #1 on: July 28, 2009, 07:45:04 PM »
Hi Steve

I really enjoyed listening to this - I think you really managed to capture a feel here, despite the home recording equipment.  The song works well, has a good arrangement.  Do you have any plans to make a more polished recording of this?  I can imagine a band playing this song...
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lightspeed182

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« Reply #2 on: July 28, 2009, 08:05:23 PM »
het tone

i dont have the talent or the resources to make it better. id love to hear it sound polished.
with a punky feel to it. thanks for asking though

i should say that if not for this site i would not be at the stage i am so far with my tunes.

i am very grateful for all your encouragement
all the best
steve

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« Reply #3 on: July 30, 2009, 05:56:10 PM »
hey lightspeed i like this one - its actually better than i thought just from reading the words. your style is quite tight with good energy.  what equipment are you using to make your demos?

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« Reply #4 on: July 31, 2009, 10:30:37 PM »
I love this track Steve!! Good work!
Cathy :)

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« Reply #5 on: August 01, 2009, 08:19:52 PM »
hiya cathy

cheers for the comment. i really appreciate the positive vibes.

dont you have any tunes/lyrics you can post?

all the best

steve