Hi friends,
I'm new to this forum, though I have had a look at some of the stuff people have on offer and the talent is great - personally I feel a bit inadequate about my own ability compared to others. I've been writing songs for a wee while now, it's basically been a hobby of mine. I started off playing in "rock" bands with school friends that never lasted too long. At that point I started writing stuff but it wasn't any good. Since the year or so in which I have left school I began writing again and have got myself a fair collection of song which I have recently decided to get down to recording. The song I want to share with you all is called "Rockland" and is inspired by the refrain the famous Ginsberg poem "Howl" (I am with you in Rockland.) I wrote this around December 2012, it was the first song I had written since I had been a wannabe rocker in school - probably the first one in well over a year. I wrote because a great friend and former band mate of mine wrote one of his own songs which I thought was great and I basically wanted to get back out there myself. What it's about I'm not really sure, it just kinda came out.
Anyway here it is -
https://soundcloud.com/torn-pages/rocklandI'm afraid the microphone isn't too great as it is all I can afford just now. It would be great if you lovely people could tell me what you think of the lyrics and aesthetics of the song. I look forward to looking at the work of you guys as well. Apologies if I haven't got the guidelines right. Peace.
Andy.
Oh and the lyrics....
Travailing through the heat of a dusty desert track,
All alone in the sun dried afternoon,
Well it took you time to realise,
The monumental mistake you made,
but I am with you in rockland,
When the bells from a church rang out on Sunday.
I could hear your muted crying,
So I took it on myself to offer you,
the only comfort you can take,
I am with you in rockland,
Even when your on your own,
Even though your far from home,
I am with you in rockland,
just to give you my love,
just to hold you close,
I am with you in rockland,
While your pondering and trying to connect the dots,
You’ve stumbled on where you got lost,
When Maria said you weren’t worthy,
She forgot your only ace,
I am with you in rockland,
Why did you go and hurry out of civilization,
I’m sure I could have helped your emancipation,
I always knew you were blind,
But I never knew you couldn’t hear
I am with you in rockland,
Even when your on your own,
Even though your far from home,
I am with you in rockland,
just to give you my love,
just to hold you close,
I am with you in rockland,
I will forgive you for all your little crimes,
The poetical murders and the cynical jibes,
You should have known the Greek didn’t trust you,
After your fall from grace,
but I am with you in rockland,
Now your in the cold waiting for battle to unfold,
Just because I never was told,
of your shitty little deeds in town,
and I am all you have left,
I am with you in rockland,
Even when your on your own,
Even though your far from home,
I am with you in rockland,
just to give you my love,
just to hold you close,
I am with you in rockland,
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