[Scarriff]

I literally don't know what to say about this song, you could almost say I'm speechless
It's so flawlessly written and somehow I have it stuck in my head lol

This song is one of the main reasons I like this forum, not only to share my own lyrics but to read masterpieces such as this... great job you nailed it!!

[Stylus]

Hi Verlon

                My friend  Your lyrics  are awesome &  Its great how  different people on this forum have
strengths in different things  Your strength  is in this piece I agree its powerful & thought provoking.

                                                     Bravo My friend    Stylus

[hardtwistmusic]

Thanks to both of you Scarff and Raj. 

I've been extremely grateful for all the postive feedback on this lyric.  And so much of the positive feedback is coming from people whose opinions are particularly meaningful to me because I so respect their work.

The two of you fit into that category.