[jonlint]

Hi,
 
I am new to the forum and song writing.  Critique of my latest song idea before I write lyrics is most welcome, good or bad.  I am a drummer/singer, so my guitar playing is not the best.

https://soundcloud.com/jonathan-linton-3/fate-of-your-hate-20131220-no

Jonathan Linton
https://soundcloud.com/jonathan-linton-3
www.sliktaktik.com

[hardtwistmusic]

Hi,
 
I am new to the forum and song writing.  Critique of my latest song idea before I write lyrics is most welcome, good or bad.  I am a drummer/singer, so my guitar playing is not the best.

https://soundcloud.com/jonathan-linton-3/fate-of-your-hate-20131220-no

Jonathan Linton
https://soundcloud.com/jonathan-linton-3
www.sliktaktik.com

Very listenable and well written.  It will easily and quickly take a lyric.    It's almost begging for a lyric.  

[nrand]

Man that is some tasty music 
I wanna sing it myself! [brings out my inner rockstar]

[jonlint]

Thanks for the compliments and feedback!  I will post a polished version with lyrics when I write them.