I've been gradually trying to write a song for the last year - with nothing coming close to finishing.
This was written and recorded in 20 minutes after an emotional spell
) - so all in all is a bit rough. Its developed slightly since this recording and now has a middle 8 humming section and slightly different ending - bull overall the same sound and format.
When I recorded it, I thought it could do with some harmony so I just quickly added a one take harmony vocal track. Hope you enjoy, and feedback more than welcomed.
Oh, and yes, the first note was really bum - I know!
http://soundcloud.com/friendlymountain/star-my-first-ever-songSTAR - By Jamie
There's a star
A real beautiful star
It is bright
and it smiles in the night
like a beacon of light
There's a star
and it's movin' real fast
I'd like to keep it in my sky
and make this feelin' last
If only thie night stayed forever
If only the night stayed forever
If only the night stayed forever
If only that star, came down for me
MIDDLE 8 - HUMMING SECTION (not in this recording)
There's a star
the most beautiful star
It's bright
and smiles in the night
like a beacon of light
See this star
coz it's movin' too fast
I'd like to set, it apart
A reason for it not to de-part
If only the night stayed forever
If only the night stayed forever
If only the night stayed forever
If only that star, came down for me