[Paulski]

I am loving this

The "standout" moment for me was the gorgeous piano intro

This sets the Christmassy feeling perfectly

I also liked the "nod" to other artists - Beach Boys, Brian May, Queen etc.

Really good start to my "listening session" this evening!

Thanks so much for the kind comments, Boydie. You're in for a treat - there are some really good songs entered - Enjoy!
Paul

[Sonata Kay]

I like this. The lyrics more than anything. You paint that picture of the excited 6 year old so well and obviously this is where the nostalgia kicks in. The bridge is probably my most favourite part.

The only thing that I would change is melody, since there's very little difference between verse and chorus.

Great job overall ! Good luck at the competition and Merry Christmas !! 

[Paulski]

I like this. The lyrics more than anything. You paint that picture of the excited 6 year old so well and obviously this is where the nostalgia kicks in. The bridge is probably my most favourite part.

The only thing that I would change is melody, since there's very little difference between verse and chorus.

Great job overall ! Good luck at the competition and Merry Christmas !! 

Thanks Sonata - I'll watch out for that next write!
Merry xmas to you too!
Paul