Hi,
I've just started using this forum so hopefully I'll get this right.
Been listening to a few tunes uploaded by some of you and liking a lot of what I hear, after I've posted this I'll try and give some feedback on some of them.
Anyway, not sure if this song is finished or not, I know the vocals are a bit ropey but I'm hoping to get a singer soon. I hate saying what my songs are about because I'm not always sure I know myself. Some feedback would be appreciated anyway, hope you like it.
https://soundcloud.com/drmousley/afraid-of-it-allAfraid of it all
Tell me, did you see the lights go out today?
The lightest of touch from your fingertips
Made them burn out to dust in the haze.
Soft boys and saints, they'll do delicate things for the girls,
But faded boys with time to kill,
Just get caught up in news of the world.
Chorus:
Someone told me you're still in the room,
But you're trying it on with the groom.
Filling the silence with false heart attacks,
And he knows you're not coming back.
A funny old thing that you asked him to do,
When he's trying so hard to impress you.
But your face is a mess and you're staying out less,
And I know you are,
A little afraid of it all.
You've seen, too many pints of his best up the wall,
And he's watching repeats of the days gone before,
On his telly he keeps in the hall.
And you know, he's got everything you need,
Tight t-shirts and faded jeans,
And a subtle obsession with the Queen.
Cheers,
Dan
