[Jamie]

https://soundcloud.com/jamie1802/god-elp-us

I wrote this song recently, and I recorded it as my first instrumental recording. It's a prog rockers song, with the theme shouting out for Hammond organ/moog treatment, but with some strat in there for good measure. There's a nice guitar break near the end (though I say so myself ).
Hope you like it, it makes me smile .
Cheers
Jamie

[hardtwistmusic]

Listened last night, then again this morning.  This is real "anthemic" (root word "anthem")  It would easily take a lyric.  Real nicely written in my opinion. 

[terrysains]

Your good you are, sounded very dated, I think you should call it, "The 70's??" Enjoyed very much. Terry.

[Jamie]

Hi guys, thanks for the feedback, as always it's appreciated. It was written (if I say so in a very humble way, to emulate Emerson ,Lake and Palmer who were a great 70's band), and this (to my ear at least) is an attempt to emulate them. It was great fun to do to
It's nice not to feel too tied to a style or period, and for me any kind of musicianship, or writing skill is a blessing! It could have had a lyric, but I specifically set out to do something different. I wanted to crash as much into the 3 mins as possible. Although I could never try to aspire to the talent of the guys in ELP.

Cheers guys

Jamie

[Homeless Recluse]

Great keyboard sound bud....needs more guitar though!

Love the ending

[tina m]

i got emerson lake & palmer straight away... omg i hated them... my brother loved them & rush ...
i usualy had to leave the room...anyway as far as  prog rock goes it sounded very good & a dead ringer for what used to come out of my brothers bedroom all night ...till he discovered girls
nice guitar break at the end but wished that was longer
what do you want feedback about? are you trying to improve it? & turn it into to a triple concept album with orchestra & gatefold lyric booklet

[Jamie]

Hi Tinam,
             I don't really think I  was looking for feedback on this as a developmental issue, as it's clearly not a current vibe, but it was a kind of homage to great musicianship. It clearly was a 70's thing, but never the less was great playing. I just wanted to see if I could create an authentic elp sound! It's a homage to superlative musicianship. If I've done that then my work on this is complete .
Cheers
Jamie