Hey everyone,
This originaly started off in the lyrics section,
But being as i have started making the music to it i feel it is better suited here now.
I've tried to make the music sound sombre so that it fits the lyrics,
Also I didn't want the music to sound repetitive after 3 verses which I think this might due to it being a slow song But i feel once words have been added I think it won't be too bad.
So far I've only got the music for the first 3 verses and the pre chorus which you can hear below.https://soundcloud.com/peppermint3/a-mothers-son-updated/s-4KX00I've also changed a few words in the lyrics so that it fits the music a little better too.The song is basically about a guy who is having a hard time coping with the death of his mother. Does anyone have any ideas on how I could improve it also I feel that the Pre chorus is better then the actual chorus,
So I was think of making the pre chorus the chorus instead should I do this?A Mothers Son
V1
Whenever, I had a nightmare,
you'd hug, me back to sleep,
And this is just one of those childhood memories,
I would, like to keep.
V2
And whenever, I felt so lonely,
Or whenever, I felt so scared,
you said you'd always be there beside me,
But now your gone.
V3
As we went, into your final hours,
You told, me to always be brave,
But all, I have now is a bunch of these blossoming flowers,
To place upon your grave,
PC
I still have all the tears filling up my eyes,
along with these emotions I just can't disguise, C
Won't you come back to me, back for me,
I don't want to feel like this for eternity,
come back to me, back for me,
Your the only person that I want to see.
B
And now People keep on telling me that I need to move on,
But I always end up playing your favourite song,
They're telling me that I have to keep strong,
But all I get is a feeling that I just can't move on,
C
So won't you come back to me, back for me,
I don't want to feel like this for eternity,
come back to me , back for me,
Your the only person that I want to see.
Outro
Now people may keep looking down on me,
But I'm only trying to be a mother's son.
Thanks
Peppermint