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Jamie

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« on: October 26, 2013, 11:39:54 AM »
Hi all,
         I've been playing with a pseudo classical piano piece for months and finally tried to construct a song around it. I've kept it simple in terms of arrangement. I wanted to create a sound and a melody reminiscent of a hymn. I tried to have 2 and 3 part harmonies throughout the song but it was taking forever, so in the end I only have them in the chorus, so interested to hear views!
         The premise is that life is tough and if you try to avoid that fact you are deceiving yourself, and you will learn nothing. Without studying the 'bad' things in life we fail to learn from our mistakes. Also there is a nod towards those people who are prepared to sacrifice their own lives so that others can live in peace and freedom.

Does any of this make sense? ??? :P :-\ :o
Cheers
Jamie
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We can't turn away from our troubles in life
We learn from our history, hardship and strife
The sun on our faces, the rain from the sky
The cry of a child as we ask ourselves why

We live for our loves and the need to grow
All types of learning we need to know
We die from ignorance, from fear and flight
We're searching in darkness and seeking out light

All people we love and the land we defend
Are all a part of who we are in the end

Face up to the demons, it's a real life out there
Sometimes it's torture and too much to bear
There's good and there's evil, famine and feast
The light of the Gods and the mark of the beast

All people we love and the land we defend
Are all a part of who we are in the end
Sometimes we have to be brave and sometimes have to fight
Ignorance and evil are the thieves in the night

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« Reply #1 on: October 27, 2013, 01:10:31 AM »
Hi all,
         I've been playing with a pseudo classical piano piece for months and finally tried to construct a song around it. I've kept it simple in terms of arrangement. I wanted to create a sound and a melody reminiscent of a hymn. I tried to have 2 and 3 part harmonies throughout the song but it was taking forever, so in the end I only have them in the chorus, so interested to hear views!
         The premise is that life is tough and if you try to avoid that fact you are deceiving yourself, and you will learn nothing. Without studying the 'bad' things in life we fail to learn from our mistakes. Also there is a nod towards those people who are prepared to sacrifice their own lives so that others can live in peace and freedom.

Does any of this make sense? ??? :P :-\ :o
Cheers
Jamie
https://soundcloud.com/jamie1802/who-we-are

Who we are

We can't turn away from our troubles in life
We learn from our history, hardship and strife
The sun on our faces, the rain from the sky
The cry of a child as we ask ourselves why

We live for our loves and the need to grow
All types of learning we need to know
We die from ignorance, from fear and flight
We're searching in darkness and seeking out light

All people we love and the land we defend
Are all a part of who we are in the end

Face up to the demons, it's a real life out there
Sometimes it's torture and too much to bear
There's good and there's evil, famine and feast
The light of the Gods and the mark of the beast

All people we love and the land we defend
Are all a part of who we are in the end
Sometimes we have to be brave and sometimes have to fight
Ignorance and evil are the thieves in the night
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« Reply #2 on: October 27, 2013, 01:11:16 AM »
Loved the instrumental.  Still listening to the rest.  But I absolutely loved the piano work and the whole instrumental.
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Alan Starkie

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« Reply #3 on: October 27, 2013, 08:13:15 PM »
Hi Jamie,

I'm getting Yes/Zombies and a bit of 'Could it be magic' at the beginning!

Some great harmonies and a nod to John Lesson too I think.

Quite prog rock. Nice playing too.

I'll enjoy listening to the final version when you post it.

Alan.

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« Reply #4 on: October 29, 2013, 04:26:01 PM »
Hi guys,
             Thanks for the feedback, it's appreciated.

HTW,
         Glad you like the playing, arrangement and instrumentation.
Hi Alan,
            Glad you liked the harmonies, they're hard work to do! Not sure what to think about being compared to John Lesson? ??? :o ;)
Cheers

Jamie

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« Reply #5 on: October 31, 2013, 09:31:02 PM »
Ha! What was I thinking?!

Probably work....