[Stylus]

   Hi  Diademgrove Thanx'z for the listen  I'll turn the drums down  & do all the other improvements on the song.  Hopefully it will enhance & improve the song.   Cheerz Pal Very Kind of ya!   
           DING-DONG What a cheerful reviewer  You izz    A bow to you for the kind words & normally I have guitar in my songs(as that is my main instrument)  but on this I thought to
be void of it.....but then again  If you think it warrants a Guitar....Than so be it!  A guitar you will get! (but Not for xmas  my friend)  he,he,he,he
            The vocals(confession) No rehearsal! just put it down 1 take  as a 'Guide' for marmite DOGMAX just so he had an idea of melody.He is a much better singer than I &  I thought 'My vocal version would not be heard.Anyway  he wants me to complete the song & thats what I'll do.Improve & take heed of all the comments to date. 
             You have my kind of humour.... Me likez that   Thanx'z   Ding-Dong  Stylus

[Stylus]

   Apologies   Ding-Dong   I meant  BIG DONG  but already  posted  till I heard your New song

                                         Anyway........Thanx'z again   BIG-DONG 

[Stylus]

Hi 
        Songsta'Zzzzzzz    I've got a flight to catch 2mello  mornin'   I'll leave you with this.......

    It'z that  'Unfinished'  Song that will never  be finished!    bye for now 

                                      &  sadly  bye to   Skydivin............     



                              https://soundcloud.com/stylus-barot/skydivin-stylus

[Alan Starkie]

I'd go more acoustic guitar and big drums and slow the tempo a tad.

I grows on you as you listen but it's just a bit too bossa nova for me at the moment.

You could really go somewhere with this song.

Cheers,

Alan.

[Stylus]

   Hi Thanx'z for the listen...appreciated    I've kind of lost interest or given up on this as its not really going anywhere.....unlike me ( just back from Europe) 

        Thanx'z Alan.....................I do need to get a decent drum machine   Stylus