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The last day

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zare09

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« on: October 14, 2013, 09:06:49 PM »
I don't know what kind of style to be this song please give me some ideas and please correct me where i'm wrong....THANKS

The last day

I've came home very drunk,
the neighbor called 911.
We are hooligans and your daughter too
she enters through the window, is that cool.

When the saw me drinking coffee with girl
Next day I hear "do you sleep with her"
if i sit at lunch with one rich man
Later I hear "are you drug dealer"

Why, when i wear that hat
everyone thinks that i'm murder
And everyday the same
so, what do you want from me

If you don't know why?
please let me live my life!!!

chorus:x2
Today i'll open my blinds
And live for me no for the others
I'll do what i want in my house
open your mind and shut your mouth.
Let everyone sing yeah yee
and live like it's
the last day
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We are sons of great legends
who died by their fame.
some people said they understand the world
but these peace of land they called it curse.

I can't understand why?
We hate what we've made
and like that from the others.

Now it's time for you to change
to be happy you don't need a fame
you, you are not bad man
stand up and fight 'cause you are soldier.

chorus:x2
Today i'll open my blinds
And live for me no for the others
I'll do what i want in my house
open your mind and shut your mouth.
Let everyone sing yeah yee
and live like it's the last day.

BooBoo

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« Reply #1 on: October 16, 2013, 02:35:14 PM »
Some good lines, I especially like the first half of the song.
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