[fischermans]

Hello all you fantastic musicians  
I wrote this song for my 17 years old sun because of his trouble finding a sweet girlfriend and his endless thoughts about.
Not perfect produced but I have less time for the moment.Sorry.

Version only me and my guitar
https://soundcloud.com/a-fisch-1/bleeding-hearts

Bandversion with strings and flute
https://soundcloud.com/a-fisch-1/bleeding-hearts-bandversion

Bleeding Hearts

1) I don´t know how lovely you could be
I don´t know how perfect you will be
I don´t know how to find my way to you
I don´t know if you are in the near

Refrain: I will love this feeling
I will love when our hearts are bleeding
I will love when we are kissing
and when we are each other missing

2) I don´t know if you are in the near
I don´t know which way I will find
I don´t know that many reason to resign
I don´t know if I ever see your face

Refrain: I will love this...

3) I don´t know if I can further wait
I don´t know if I should be so straight
I may still have to wait
I may dream every night of you
I may kiss you all over in my dreams
and may sometime I know all off my silent screams

Refrain: I will love this...

4) I will love you till my time goes by
as much as I can do
never mind back in all the time
I was missing you
I was missing you
missing you

Hope you like
Alexander

[mellowman]

Hi Alexander,

the lyrics show your love and your loving heart. This is a very touchy song !

Cheers,

Roni + Martin 

[fischermans]

Hello Roni and Martin
Thank you for your comment.
Alexander

[digger72]

Hi Alexander,

The lyrics resonate as i too was that troubled 17 year old quite a few moons ago. But, there's always someone out there - usually when you're not looking.
As a song It felt like you are in your comfort zone. I'd like to hear you branch out. Yes, it has your trademark vocals and lovely acoustic sound, but I'd like to hear it a little more adventurous. Maybe some finger picking, etc. The end works nice with the whistle and softly fading vocal.

Cheers,

Digger

[Dave Bradley]

Tender.

[fischermans]

Hello
@digger72
Thanks for your words.Here is a version I added some more instruments.Hope you like.
@sciencebase
Thank you.

https://soundcloud.com/a-fisch-1/bleeding-hearts-bandversion

Regards Alexander

[Stylus]

   Hi  Alex  I'm a fan of yours  Theres something unique about  you & your style........

   I dont know bits  sound like  Saeed!   he,he,he,he   


                                      Beautiful    I love it!               

[fischermans]

Hi Stylus
I thought I like you but now I have to think about this again  
You love it? I sell it to you.
Thanks Alexander

[Stylus]

I knew it!    You didnt call me :   My Lovely Stylus     

   One day  I might play on one of your tracks !  but you'll have to creep &  be nice to me! 

[fischermans]

Hello my new lovely Stylus 
What would you play on one of my tracks? Romeo or Julia?
Don´t worry you get the part.
Your Alexander

[beckylucythomas]

I love love love the beautiful refrain!! I think there is not quite enough movement in the verses, but then the chorus comes in and it flies.....

I also love the whistled ending. So laid back. I can imagine a young lad has just met the girl of his dreams, and now walks around whistling this and nothing can touch him........

If your son can write something like this and sing it to a girl he likes, i am sure she will fall for him!!

[fischermans]

Hello Caco
Thank you for your words.What is funny on this story. The same day I have posted the new song I drove to the disco to pick up my son and he told me that he has a new girlfriend.
All's well that ends well.
Alexander

[Neil C]

Alexander,
Nicely swaying simple tune with a sympathetic arrangement.
 
Neil

[Alan Starkie]

Hi Alexander,

It's heart felt and reminds me of 'Close to you'.

Thanks,

Alan.

[hardtwistmusic]

Hello Caco
Thank you for your words.What is funny on this story. The same day I have posted the new song I drove to the disco to pick up my son and he told me that he has a new girlfriend.
All's well that ends well.
Alexander

Heh heh heh.... That "new girlfriend" thing doesn't ALWAYS "end well."  :O) 

Ask me how I know.