Well Tony
Sorry for not posting here been busy for the past few weeks.
Great lyrics Tony starting with your words that give us thoughts of his early days as we stand outside his auntie house and then your chorus create a wonderful image of him sitting playing a white piano.
The kaleidoscope of colours verse, as you know i was a bit confuse with this verse when i read it at first, but you explain it in such a way that it opens up so many different moments of his journey through life, there is so much going on in this verse, each line just add to the reason why he really was a truly great artist.
Then the sadness of the last verse and that last line (just for a moment the world died) and you're right (they have their place, strawberry fields people mourn and candles burn for peace) lyrics that says it all really, it all read to me like you have it the way you want it, these where your words (I wanted it to flow and roll of the tongue, but be complex so the reader has to think what does that mean, then ahh yes I get it) cant wait to hear this when someone puts their music to it.
Just to let everyone know the reason why Tony sent me these wonderful lyrics of his was because of a song i wrote call The Day JFK Died, another sad moment in our history.
Really great lyrics Tony and the very Best of luck with this, really do hope one or more of the great Musicians here put their Magic to this, talk soon Mate.
