[zare09]

Oh
Yeah
ugh

You know you love me, I know you care
Just talk whenever, and I'll be there
You are my sweetheart, you are my heart
And we will never ever ever be apart

If I was your partner, I'd never let you smoke
Keep you on my arm, you'd never be alone
I can be your nose, anything you want
If I was your partner, I'd never let you smoke, I'd never let you smoke

Sweetie, sweetie, sweetie ugh
Like baby, baby, baby nooo
Like sweetie, sweetie, sweetie ugh
I thought you'd always be mine (mine)

When I met you sweetie my mind went crash
Now them tigers in my chest won't stop stop
And even though it's a struggle love is all we got
So we gonna keep keep shouting to the mountain top

There's gonna be one more mind going crash
One more mind going crash
One more mind going crash

Your mouth, my biggest weakness
Shouldn't have let you know
I'm always gonna do what they say (hey)
If you need me
I'll come kissing
From a thousand miles away
When you sing I sing (oh whoa)
You smile, I smile
Hey

Na na na, na na na, na na ugh
Yeah sweetheart
Na na na, na na na, na na na ugh
If I was your partner
Na na na, na na na, na na na ugh
Na na na, na na na, na na na ugh
If I was your partner

My friends say I'm a fool to think
That you're the one for me
I guess I'm just a smelly fool for my sweetie

[S.T.C]

Strange lyric 

[Jess]

I swear each 'bit' of the song fits to the tune of a justin bieber song? Like I'm not even a fan of his but I read one verse to 'boyfriend' and another verse was basically identical to 'baby' hmm...

[BooBoo]

I'm pretty sure you've copied Bieber but oh well, not a fan if him

[Alan Starkie]

No idea what's going on but it made me laugh. Was it supposed to?

[Gallowglass]

Yeah, ditto what the others have said: you've copied (and arguably improved) the meter of a couple of Bieber songs. If that was your intention, your intention wasn't clear from the lyrics.

Also:

When I met you sweetie my mind went crash
Now them tigers in my chest won't stop stop

The first line makes me think of a crash-to-desktop and Ctrl-Alt-Deleting you. The second line makes me think of Lara Croft.

You may want to consider revising.

[jameba]

Definitely wrote this listening to justin Bieber, random but funny song title

[darkvampire666]

Is this meant to be funny? It was far too similar to Bieber for my liking. The title and lyrics amused me immensely though. I'll give you that.