[postmn]

instrumental came from youtube


Verse 1
here i am with my number 1 pen
sitting in class waiting for the weekend
im afraid this wont end
the lies, nobody got karma, its just me left on own
im trying to act to grown, i sit and i wait, and wait
for the day someone says 'you want saving'
 course i want saving, save me

Chorus
they said i wont make it on my own
yet hear i stand,  on my feet
and i feel grand,i tell where i am
im singing to a thousand crowd
uh wat u say now?
They said i wont make it on my own
yet hear i stand,i can hear the chant of a thousand fans
so wat u say now?
so wat u say now?

Verse 2
They trying free me like im in chains
they think im a monster cause im diffrent in ways
you can never change me,
never hold me,never break me
i got my callin card and im gonna hold it hard
the stars, they shining on me what can i say
but okay okay, i wan to make so much dough it got me going loko

Chorus
they said i wont make it on my own
yet hear i stand, im on my feet
and i feel grand,i tell where i am
im singing to a thousand crowd
uh wat u say now?
They said i wont make it on my own
yet hear i stand,i can hear the chant of a thousand fans
so   wat you say now?
so   wat you say now!

Verse 3
im upon on stage, im enjoyin the fame
lights camara action, here i can express my passion
and you better listen
cause this song was made by your actions
if only you could see me now even mama would be proud
god bless her, without i would still be in stormy weather
look now its better, its rain gold let me take a picture

Chorus x2
they said i wont make it on my own
yet hear i stand, im on my feet
and i feel grand,i tell where i am now
im singing to a thousand crowd
uh wat u say now?
They said i wont make it on my own
yet hear i stand,i can hear the chant of a thousand fans
so wat u say now?
so wat u say now?

 i said i wont make it on my own
yet hear i stand, im on my feet
and i feel grand,i tell where i am
im singing to a thousand crowd
uh wat i say now

[tone]

Hey postmn

Thanks for posting your lyric. I get the feeling this is a rap/ hip-hop song? Some of it is good - the odd line stands out and the rhythm is solid. What doesn't work so well for me is the subject matter. It seems to me that at least half of the hip-hop songs I hear these days are about the same thing - the whole 'you said I'd fail, now look at my success'. Not your fault, but it makes your song sound unoriginal and a little jaded.

Looking forward to hearing more from you

[postmn]

im still trying to get every line to stand out and ill come up with something original