[lightspeed182]

the lights are going down in hollywood

its getting dimmer day by day

the sun no longer shines

everybodys sitting in the shade


the streets and parks are filled with jamborees

theres children playing in the hay

the dark is drawing in

you baten down your hatch or run away


the lights are going down in hollywood

they'll not return or so they say

their time is running out

everybody shout hip, hip horray

[tone]

Can't beat a bit of light hearted yank bashing eh Steve? :p  I think the feeling of saturation by a pervasive presence of all things Hollywood is pretty universal among thinking folks these days.  What sort of tune/ musical aspect does this one have?

[lightspeed182]

hey tone

all my tune i think are quite basic. this one is c f g am i think goes round and round. not anything special but i like it. gonna try my hardest to get them down on my four track to let you hear my sound. thanks for the reply.

steve

[aaron]

i don't understand the children playing in the hay - hollywood isn't in the countryside (i don't think)
also i didn't think hip hip hooray sounds like a song - would be hard to sing. I like your other stuff better lightspeed