[KristoferPetersen]

wow, this is amazing. I love the minimalistic synth line. the snare could use a tiny bit of reverb. The second part of the song is interesting, I like how it's slightly "off" and dissonant. Definitely a nice piece of music.

[hardtwistmusic]

Okay... so it's not commercial.  But I've got just one thought in my head.

DAMN THAT WAS GOOD.  I'd buy it before I'd buy half the tripe on the radio.

[Stylus]

I Love the  Stirling accent!  & the song itself  especially towards the 2 minute on bits  which is so full of colouration & vibes. The best thing about this is that you are experimenting & creating something
that is different & stands out from the crop.

                                                          Great  stuff!        STYLUS     

[Kafla]

Thanks everyone - I was thinking of doing that November Album writing month challenge this year

I have an idea of developing this into an album and trying to develop a plot over the 10 songs with the robbery right in the middle

I know what I want but we can see if I pull it off   

[tone]

Holy cow I didn't know you was a Glaswegian gangsta yo. Seriously impressed with this bit of work Kaf.

It's a bit of a dream of mine to have the opportunity to make music for a film, so hearing your track gets me really fired up about this dream. Particularly because I think you've nailed it. Didn't know you were so handy with a synth. Or at acting (assuming that's you doing the voice-over?).

There's real skill involved in making what you've made here. I really hope this film gets picked up, if only for your sake.

Very atmospheric, nice dynamic touches, great combination of sounds, great words & lyrics. Much as I'd like to offer constructive criticism, I can't! And this is still a work in progress? Can't wait to hear it finished.

[benjo]

hey,

WOW I like this a lot great vocals, and everything works well for me
really enjoyed this clever stuff

look forward to the finished piece,  ell done

                              tony.