OOOhh - I REALLY (really really really) like this one
I particularly like the delayed start of the vocal lines so that they come in after the bar - this adds so much more interest to the track
The melody works really well against the chords, which have some really nice textures to them
The only comment I would make is that there are a few points in the track where you are playing a "suspended chord" (I don't have an instrument with me to find the exact chord) - the first instance is at around 14 secs with the second instance at around 22secs
For me, these work really well as the track drives on
However, at the 3rd instance at around 31 secs I think the "suspension" needs to "resolve" - ie it sounds like you are playing a "Suspended 4th" chord - if you moved the 4th note in the chord down a semitone you would have the "normal" chord and it would give the track a sense of "release" after the "tension" of the suspended chord - adding more interest to the song
This is really clunky to explain in words but I hope you know what I am getting at
This is just a really minor personal thought and in no way detracts from a fantastic song
Definitely my favourite of yours (so far
) and that is no mean feat in itself!!!
