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"Bathsalt Jesus" - MRI (summer song comp) [producers' cut]

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« on: August 29, 2013, 08:25:02 AM »
we entered this in the summer song competition. watch in HD for best audio/image. enjoy :)
- DTT, George, Alan, Dan

"Bathsalt Jesus" / genre: heavy alternative
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=S-0TR4tj0ao
(producers' cut)


Bathsalt Jesus
Words & Music by Daren Thomas Turner © 2013  / MRI
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Closer is the last wave and far away from here
Halloween costumed and dead tsunamical
A twilight of your idols; a midnight of your sun
Insufferable as the company of one

Seriously are you kidding me?
Starring in your own no one show
Instagrammed like a jellyfish hash-tagged with #noSpine

Colder than a dark star and frozen into space
All your motivation an accoutrement at best
Bedizen me with Snooki like lobster in a sauce
Alive when you kill it off the planet earth

At minute number seventeen
I stopped my own cold heart
I closed my eyes and walked out of the summertime


Over, like these movie credits shot out into space
All the extras' names are written on your face
All the characters you always got to play
(They perished deus ex machina: in a botox hurricane)

I was born to die just to save the human race
I was born to die just so you could eat my face
I was born to die just to save the human race
I was born to die just so you could eat my face


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Daren Thomas Turner: guitars, vocals
George Matthews: drums
Alan Cruz: bass, analog samples

Engineered by Daren Thomas Turner
Produced by Danarchy and Daren Thomas Turner © 2013 MRI
« Last Edit: September 09, 2013, 02:41:33 PM by ABeautifulVirus »

Saeed AlSuri

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« Reply #1 on: August 29, 2013, 08:59:45 AM »
Very nice riff .. in 5/4 beat .. very nice indeed .. will the genre is not my thing ..

Well done guys .. nice work ..


cheers ..

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« Reply #2 on: August 29, 2013, 10:58:23 AM »
Nice to see someone who writes whackier lyrics than me :D

good heavy riff....vocals could do to be more forward,(for me)..nice solo...btw just caught that....

I`m off to see Robert Plant this evening(i hope)....so your getting me in the mood... ;)

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« Reply #3 on: August 29, 2013, 06:22:31 PM »
Nice to see someone who writes whackier lyrics than me :D

good heavy riff....vocals could do to be more forward,(for me)..nice solo...btw just caught that....

I`m off to see Robert Plant this evening(i hope)....so your getting me in the mood... ;)

LOL cool :) ya the lyrics work on a lot of levels ;p I'll save their explanation for another thread on metaphysics, cultural memes, and religious idolatry ;p

SWEET ENJOY THE ROBERT PLANT SHOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! wish I were there!!

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« Reply #4 on: September 09, 2013, 02:40:43 PM »
Very nice riff .. in 5/4 beat .. very nice indeed .. will the genre is not my thing ..

Well done guys .. nice work ..


cheers ..

hey Saeed!! wanted to thank you and also thank you for comments on youTube! we pulled that version down to put up official version ( here
) so I didn't want you to be offended in any way as youtube doesn't allow one to swap out videos and keep same URL like Vimeo etc... so your kind comment is gone too hence this post of gratitude :)

love odd time sigs!!! also all guitars here are tuned to DADGAD / hope Jimmy Page approves lol

thanks again bro you rock!

- Daren T :)

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« Reply #5 on: September 09, 2013, 09:49:04 PM »
Hello
Not my favorite musik style but there are some very good lyric lines and the guitar is well played. Nice guitar solo.The vocals are indeed a bit to much behind the instruments as STC wrote.
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« Reply #6 on: September 13, 2013, 08:44:26 PM »
Hello
Not my favorite musik style but there are some very good lyric lines and the guitar is well played. Nice guitar solo.The vocals are indeed a bit to much behind the instruments as STC wrote.
Regards Alexander

hey thanks Alexander!! ya I hear what you're saying - but i kinda like the vox ducked back a bit. also the more i think of it since it's a social satire song maybe the lyrics might be too much for some more conservative ears so best to just hum along to the melody ;p

-Daren