Yep! You cannot
enhance a soul unless youre Frankenstein
Theres too much 'cliche'
rhyming almost as if any word will do. unlike many praising your English I think theres a lack of eduacation & you can churn out 10 songs a day but one done with care might be a better way to get a good song. You've written a song about 'Selling a guitar' another called: Delete You which sounds like you are having a relationship with a mobile phone application.
Get a dictionary & look up what words mean? you cant write stuff like(example)
Hello my darling...my lobster arms are longing for you...
Life with you .. is full of joy n happiness ..
Life with you .. fills my Sad Emptiness .. contradiction?
Are you happy or sad or dont you know.....
?
Anyway remember Your songs are your legacy.....leave something decent behind
Good luck Stylus