Hi Alan, i think someone should try to throw lyrics on it....., and i hoping you would also go for that...because else i think this project may "freeze up", in this thread i will collect the lyrics and lines forumites have suggested to get this project rolling, if i would forget some lines and ideas, please forumites add them to this thread... here are lyrics from Habi:
"Listen Hard
Can you spare
Some of your time
Listen close
Inspect the rhymes
Can you judge
Can you decide
Find the meaning
In my lines
I have spent
Ungodly hours
Wrote of life
And death and flowers
Deep within
This hole I dug
Mining deeper
For this drug
Anxiously awaiting
Hanging on your words
Time has started crawling
Butterflies and nerves
Listen hard
And listen good
You promised me
You said you would
Cut me down
Or crown me king
Tell me truth
Say everything
Was it good
Was it bad
Will I smile
Will I be sad
In the end
In fourteen days
All forgotten
Off the page
Listen hard
And listen good
You promised me
You said you would
Cut me down
Or crown me king
Tell me truth
Say everything"
thoughts from Benjo:
"creative minds so diverse
pluck a tune from nowhere
and make it work"
lines from Dogmax:
"We have all come together, writers of words
Musicians, singers, one and all
So journey with us into our secret world
Where we'll sing and dance in our next port of call"
amendments made to that by Fishermans:
"We all come together, writers of words
Musicians, singers some of them birds
We show you the way into our secret world
Where music is all and nothing hurts"
if i am forgetting bits and pieces please add them in this thread, and please keep adding ideas. is it possible to work on this, Alan...yes, i am trying to take maximum advantage of your volunteering
but if you want, i don't mind trying to fit things on the music and melody you offered, but for some reason i think the result will be better if you would go for it
ah, this must be one of my longests posts...i wonder if anyone is still reading this
cheers