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"I Saw Jesus Today"

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SteveA

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« on: August 18, 2013, 09:00:42 PM »
One of the singles on my new 6 song EP released on Friday....If you want to listen/purchase the full EP, my web-site is at the bottom of the page.

"I Saw Jesus Today”
© 2011 Steve Altonian

http://www.soundclick.com/stevealtonian

An Old Man Asked Me Sir Can You Spare A Buck?
I'm A Little Down On My Luck
Soiled Clothing Smelling Of Stale Beer
Didn't Want To Get Too Near

As He Told Me 'Bout The Story Of His Life
I Had To Blink Twice When I Gazed Into His Eyes

"I Saw Jesus Today"
Never Had A Ton Of Faith
Got A Good Look At His Face
I Know This May Sound Strange
"I Saw Jesus Today"

New Year’s Eve Down At Grandma's House
She Wore The Year’s Biggest Smile
Preaching Friendship Is What This Life's About
Said Sonny Save Up Your Dimes

She Proposed A Prayer And Toast To 1965
She Loves Them Beatles And She Swears John's Still Alive

"I Saw Jesus Today"
Never Had A Ton Of Faith
Got A Good Look At His Face
I Know This May Sound Strange
"I Saw Jesus Today"

I’m A Daddy For The First Time, the Greatest Joy I've Ever Known
The Gift Of Life In The Arms Of My Lovely Wife, My Boy Looked Me In The Eye

"I Saw Jesus Today"
Never Had A Ton Of Faith
Got A Good Look At His Face
I Know This May Sound Strange
"I Saw Jesus Today"

"I Saw Jesus Today"
"I Saw Jesus Today"
Gods Precious Gift Of Life In The Arms Of My Lovely Wife……"I Saw JesusToday"
Gods Precious Gift Of Life In TheArms Of My Lovely Wife……"I Saw Jesus Today"
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Saeed AlSuri

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« Reply #1 on: August 18, 2013, 10:27:26 PM »
Hello ..

Great song .. wonderful singing .. production .. nice country song .. love the lyrics ..

very well done work ..  :D :D :D

 Cheers man ..

SteveA

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« Reply #2 on: August 19, 2013, 04:32:05 PM »
Hello ..

Great song .. wonderful singing .. production .. nice country song .. love the lyrics ..

very well done work ..  :D :D :D

 Cheers man ..

Thx Saeed for the great words

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« Reply #3 on: August 20, 2013, 12:08:14 PM »
Hi and welcome.

I don't get the purpose of the quotation marks. Just reading the lyrics they put me off the trail. It reads like someone else is saying it, but from the singing and sense, it's you saying it? Only a minor point, though. Cheers

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« Reply #4 on: August 20, 2013, 06:29:23 PM »
hey,

what a great tune really well sung, great production
pleasure to listen to, thanks for posting,   tony...

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« Reply #5 on: August 21, 2013, 11:10:37 AM »
Hi I really like "Holdin On". Great vocals and the production is clean and crisp. I like the drum sound.

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« Reply #6 on: August 21, 2013, 12:26:07 PM »
I really like this.

Well crafted and great production.

Clear imagery in your lyrics and nice melodic hook on the 'money line'.

Well done.

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« Reply #7 on: August 21, 2013, 02:32:53 PM »
hey,

what a great tune really well sung, great production
pleasure to listen to, thanks for posting,   tony...

Thanks Tony

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« Reply #8 on: August 22, 2013, 02:38:27 AM »
Quality song here mate. Great voice and a production that showcases this tune in the best possible light.

Kudos to you.

Allan.