Hi everyone, I'm still here but been busy changing jobs
MUSIC ADDED HERE: https://soundcloud.com/gtbr/footprints-in-the-sand-demo
sorry, technical difficulties, does this work better?
https://soundcloud.com/gtbr/footprints-in-the-sand-democomments/criticisms welcome
Here's my latest lyrics, it's the final part of 5 related songs. This is a slow one with lots of guitar with a heavy blues feel to it. A demo will be ready very soon but the current demo needs some re-takes. There is no bridge, but enough instrumental sections to vary the music. The last line of verse 3 has lyrics whereas the other verses just have a guitar motif, but the verses are all the same length.
The first four songs tell the story of a werewolf and this one is the finale.
Footprints in the Sand
verse 1
Abandoned by the mother
Tormented by another
No love is lost on this forgotten child
verse 2
Hated and defiled
Feared and reviled
Hunted down and hiding in the wild
chorus
Now the sun is rising and my soul can slip away
Innocence reborn as the moon begins to wane
I walk into the sunrise, I begin to understand
And all that remains are my footprints in the sand
verse 3
Sunrise, angry and red
Wounded, left for dead
Good and evil tearing me apart
Is this the end, (or) is this the start
chorus
As the sun is rising and my soul can slip away
Innocence reborn as the moon begins to wane
I walk into the sunrise, I begin to understand
And all that remains are my footprints in the sand
guitar solo
chorus reprise
I walk into the sunrise I begin to understand
And all that remains are my footprints in the sand
thanks for reading :-)