[Peppermint]

Hey everyone,

Here is a new song I'm working on.
And I've actually had a go and singing on this one.
Which was very hard for me to do as I'm quite shy and hate the sound of my voice and to top it off i can't sing either  

So this song is about a man whose dying and he's saying goodbye to his wife.
I've tried to give the song a sad sound to it.

The lyrics so far........

Memories

My Love,
I have to go,
It's time for me to say goodbye.

Memories,
They'll come and go,
And they'll make you cry

Not alot so far I know but don't want to carry on with it if its heading in the wrong direction if know what i mean.

the non singing Instrumental version "probably the better one LOL  "
https://soundcloud.com/peppermint3/memories-no-singing/s-9ajwA

And the me singing Version  
https://soundcloud.com/peppermint3/memories/s-mRP78

Due to the re-verb on this track i feel its best listened to through your headphones.

Also it's no where near finished yet but would like some feedback to see if its worth carrying on with it.

So please let me know what you think of it.

[Dutchbeat]

Hi Peppermint, i went for the singing version right away...


not bad, not bad at all, but it is very short

certainly worth carrying on, but it depends on what will happen next...i hope you hear a fuller version soon

[Peppermint]

Hey Dutchbeat,

Thanks for the feedback. 
Now I know that it's not just me who thinks this could go somewhere.

Just got to decide now whether to keep it as a slow track or make this the stat to something a little more upbeat.

Will hopefully get a few more verses on here soon.

Peppermint

[Jamie]

Hi Peppermint,
                       I listened to the singing version! Not bad at all.very difficult to comment too much as it is very short. Synths a bit overpowering though. Need to think about structure ( verses, chorus Middle eight intro outro............)
                        Keep working on it!
Cheers
Jamie

[Peppermint]

Hi Peppermint,
                       I listened to the singing version! Not bad at all.very difficult to comment too much as it is very short. Synths a bit overpowering though. Need to think about structure ( verses, chorus Middle eight intro outro............)
                        Keep working on it!
Cheers
Jamie

Thanks for the feedback Jamie