Well I've actually done it
I've written 3 songs so far and put one up on soundcloud for someone, you, to hear.
https://soundcloud.com/my-idiom/im-gonna-make-it-on-my-own-1I don't claim to be able to sing so be gentle..
I'd love any positive criticism at all at this stage, melody, harmony, structure, lyrics whatever. I have my own critiscisms so it would be interesting to know what others think.
V1
Suddenly chasing and anticipating my moves
Playing the game when I haven't been given the rules
My queens gone this games getting old, this ain't the deal I was sold
But While I've still got a breath I'm gonna hold my head high and believe
Chorus
I'm gonna make it on my own
I don't need money or trappings or to sit on a throne
I'm gonna make it on my own
I've got the air that I breath and where I lay down I'll make it my home
V2
Walkin the line and I make sure I pay all my dues
Trying to make my own way in a world that's so cruel
This ain't the path that I chose, I wanna walk in someone elses clothes
But While I've still got a breath I'm gonna hold my head high and believe
V3
Searching around but I just can't seem to find the right groove
I'm looking for answers but I Cant even work out the clues
I've tried like nobody knows, on my face are lines where it shows
But While I've still got a breath I'm gonna hold my head high and believe