[S.T.C]

a sort of a song like poem...sentimental ,but on this sunny English day it sort of seemed fitting to write it.

beautiful memories
of sunsets and honeybees
green leaved shady trees
children saying yes please

smoke from a chimney stack
waiting to see when fathers back
coming down the beaten track
i`ll wait and see...

beautiful memories
of silver planes and candy canes
white ghosts from a passing train
laughing clouds and the morning rain

never grow old
never grow old
oh never grow old
my child.....

[benjo]

hey STC,

sweet I like it it's really simple yeah I can see you sat in the garden just rhyming words
lets hear it to music now tony...

[S.T.C]

I will this is so simple..i can hardly screw it up.

[Stylus]

Great!   Simple........Less is more!    work's    Look forwards  to rendition  whenever  Stylus

[Kevin j]

its nice, i like it, but theres no the verse are all diferent, structure wise, it mightnt make aby
diference, butcyou never kno

[seriousfun]

I hear the last piece of the structure being the chorus that ties the three verses together. V C V C V C
I reckon it would work very well that way.

I tried it alternating with Amaj7 and Bm and then using an E as the turn around and it sounded very pretty.

Cool lyrics

Allan.

[Jess]

Any song that has the words 'candy cane' in is a good song

[S.T.C]

I hear the last piece of the structure being the chorus that ties the three verses together. V C V C V C
I reckon it would work very well that way.

I tried it alternating with Amaj7 and Bm and then using an E as the turn around and it sounded very pretty.

Cool lyrics

Allan.

Why don`t you record it then....i can just hear it in your style....i only see it has a 2.50 track short and sweet..

[seriousfun]

Hmmmm, i just might. If and when i do ill send you alink for download.

Allan.

[BooBoo]

Liked this, short but could work!

[Saeed AlSuri]

very nice .. loved the rhymes .. good subject ..

Cheers