Hey all
Been a while since I came on here...wow, the forum's exploded!
Work in progress? New admins? Great stuff! We just keep going from strength to strength
Anyway, I've been working on this track for ages now. I'd appreciate some feedback on production and generally fleshing it out (if you think it needs it)
ATM it's just my vocal, guitar, wee bit of organ and a bass drum. How does this all feel to you? Suggestions very welcome!
I'm gonna do a better take on the vocals too
Ta!
Peter
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The Girl With The Gun
http://soundcloud.com/la-noir/the-girl-with-the-gun-mp3Verse
There's a girl with a gun
Where she should have had a tongue
And when she speaks
She speaks to kill
Take a deep breath now
Before you shoot me down
We'll wave that white flag
And watch it burn
Chorus
Well honey you love to fight
Would you ever fight for love?
You say you're not sure
Well that makes two of us
Verse
Round and round we'll go
Always faster than before
Is it just me dahlin'
Is this all getting pretty old?
Take a deep breath now
Before we scream and shout
Can you even remember
What we're fighting about?
Chorus
Well you're quick to say what you think
You never think about what you're gonna say
We're drifting apart
Maybe we're better off this way
Outro
There was a time when we first met
We were in love, but we forget
Those nights in bed have over time
All turned into a passionless lie
You don't have to say a single word
You don't have to look me in the eye
Just hold my hand, together we'll stand
We'll stand and we'll watch something beautiful die