[seriousfun]

This is such a great piece of writing. There are so many interesting parts to this piece. The changes keep the interest very high. I was taken for a ride when I heard this the first time and I failed to listen to the lyrics, I was so absorbed by the music so it was immediately back for another listen.

Its a lovely clear production with some very good instrument choices. You vocal suits this song so very well. When you sing, I believe the message and that is all you can ask from a vocal. I loved the line 'so I go out into my honeymoon saloon' that double rhyme was inspiring.

Congratulations on a song to be proud of.

[fischermans]

@seriousfun
Thank you for your kind words.I´m proud now, really.
Alexander

[Dutchbeat]

listened again to this....

the new full version

it is a great song, and you have so much you own style, i enjoy listening to this a lot

i am not sure, whether i find this full version very much better than the version i heard earlier

i mean both were good, but mixwise i have the feeling that the different things (the strings, brass and vocal) are a bit in each other way at certain parts (i know, i should be the last person on earth to say something about that), i think that is a mixing issue


but the song is ACE!

[fischermans]

Hello Dutchbeat
Thanks for listening again (and again and again and )
and thanks for making me proud.
The mixing is not that good because I´m a quitter in mixing.Sorry never had someone who showed me something and the playing of the other instruments is also not that good because I did it myself.
Thanks again and regards Alexander