'Summer Clothes'

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theLostLad

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« Reply #15 on: July 24, 2013, 12:03:23 PM »
Lovely chorus, its got a real yearning lilt to it. I agree with flossie however that the chorus is a bit repetitive, I'd like it to become a bit more yearning, you know, 'please stay with us a while' type sentiment? Really liked the acoustic intro too, sounded a bit 'west coast' maybe?

Peppermint

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« Reply #16 on: July 24, 2013, 01:10:39 PM »
very nice  :)

Alan Starkie

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« Reply #17 on: July 24, 2013, 04:41:00 PM »
Final edit before recording-proper starts:

I've cut the initial chorus by half and done some edits.

I think the chorus can take a repeat second time around with some bv variations added.

I'm going with this arrangement now I think.

Now to start from scratch with all tracks and get the masters recorded...

It's long-winded but it works for me.