Hi Nick, welcome.
Firstly, why have you posted this in our competitions section? it's not a competition
Secondly, much as we all love to listen and review people's music, it's a reciprocal thing based around a community spirit, "I listen and review yours, you listen and review mine".
If you want feedback on your work it'd be an idea to read the forum guidelines and properly introduce yourself in the 'introductions' section first.
If you actively contribute, people will welcome you with open arms, if not, you'll be ignored.
Simples...