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unfinished pop punk demo

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chris_alker:
hey all :)

I am wanting feedback on a demo I have been working on

anything i could improve? add or change?

I have the base, but just a bit stuck on where to go!!

here it is:

http://soundcloud.com/chris_alker/pop-punk-demo

Cheers

Saeed AlSuri:
Hello chris_alker ..

Great music .. is there any lyrics to it .. I think a melody with lyrics will help you take of some where with the song ..

great playing .. love it .. waiting for the next one .. ;D ;D ;D ;D

Cheers ...

Dutchbeat:
ok, that deserves a big WOW!!!!!!

that is thight and ROCKING!!!

just needs lyrics and a singing melody......

spectacularly full phat sound

and it stops in the middle  ??? ???

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