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chris_alker

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unfinished pop punk demo

« on: July 11, 2013, 11:06:25 PM »
hey all :)

I am wanting feedback on a demo I have been working on

anything i could improve? add or change?

I have the base, but just a bit stuck on where to go!!

here it is:

http://soundcloud.com/chris_alker/pop-punk-demo

Cheers



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Saeed AlSuri

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Re: unfinished pop punk demo

« Reply #1 on: July 12, 2013, 01:30:41 PM »
Hello chris_alker ..

Great music .. is there any lyrics to it .. I think a melody with lyrics will help you take of some where with the song ..

great playing .. love it .. waiting for the next one .. ;D ;D ;D ;D

Cheers ...
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Re: unfinished pop punk demo

« Reply #2 on: July 13, 2013, 11:59:47 AM »
ok, that deserves a big WOW!!!!!!

that is thight and ROCKING!!!

just needs lyrics and a singing melody......

spectacularly full phat sound

and it stops in the middle  ??? ???
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