This one is giving me a hard time. Some songs just drop out fully formed but this one has been a pain all the way. Sometimes I think that apart from a little more instrumentation this is finished but then I thing nooooo it's too ploddy!
What do you think?
https://soundcloud.com/geoffjamesevans/tearing-up-our-hearts/s-AAxl4Tearing up our Hearts Copyright © Geoffrey James Evans 2013 All rights reserved
I got a call from Sarah
Wanted me to tell her it's alright
Needed someone to hold her
Needed someone who wasn't going to fight
Said she found herself shaking
In the rain with my number in her hand
The only call she was making
Said she knew I'd understand
She's not looking for answers
And I'll take my chances
She's not looking for fresh starts
She's just tearing up our hearts
Just tearing up our hearts
And now she's lying beside me
sleeping like my baby through the night
Her gentle breath on my body
And I can believe that it's alright
I know she'll desert me
but for now I am happy where I am
In the morning she'll hurt me
When she goes back to her man
We're not looking for answers
And we'll take our chances
We're not looking for fresh starts
We're just tearing up our hearts
Just tearing up our hearts