[seriousfun]

Wow, this was hard. Limiting the number of lyrics to just 5 candidates was a challenging exercise, I had to leave some very impressive lyrics out. I am confident that what I have left is the strongest lyric posts of the month. Please read the lyrics carefully and then send a pm to me with the following:

Competition : Lyric of the month.
Song : name of song
Composer:  composers name



You will have until 15th July at 12 midnight to make your selection. At this point no further votes will be accepted and I will collate the results and announce the best lyrics in this post.

Best of luck to all writers, may the best lyric win.


The nominees, in no particular order are:


http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/lyric-reviews/and-so-i-play-the-blues/

http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/lyric-reviews/christmas-toast-alternative-xmas-song-3-of-17/


http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/lyric-reviews/mr-negativity-(open-up-your-eyes)/

http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/lyric-reviews/brand-new-suit/

http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/lyric-reviews/better-without-you/

[crystalsuzy]

I thought this song/lyric of the month wasn't starting till July 1st   Not that it really matters

[Jess]

Same, I didn't think we were starting yet but hey ho
Although, I'm not going to lie, the song I would've picked isn't up there plus as flattered as i am, I don't think I should be nominated for this month, it's one of my worst pieces

[BooBoo]

As with the others didn't think we'd be starting yet! But wow I'm in shock that one of my songs is nominated! I don't understand what Jess is saying as all her songs are brilliant haha!

[BooBoo]

Also with the voting are you allowed to vote for your own or does it have to be someone else's. just a bit confused by this bit, thank you

[seriousfun]

You may vote for yourself - most probably will, thereby cancelling each other out.

[habiTat]

My vote is in, good work everyone, looks like even 14 year olds can write good stuff 

Who knew?   

[Jess]

My vote is in, good work everyone, looks like even 14 year olds can write good stuff 

Who knew?   

Yep, apparently we don't just swagger around wearing hoodies graffitiing old ladies houses and bricking their windows...who knew?

[benjo]

my god,

i'm gob smacked made my day thanks so much
I can't open the third link for some reason anyone tell me who it is please
I don't agree with voting for ourselves so I won't be
but good luck to everyone tony...

[Jess]

I can't open the third link for some reason anyone tell me who it is please

That's my link! Mr negativity by Jess!

[Dutchbeat]

i just checked, and the link opens, and yes, that is very impressive

great lyrics IMO, i am going to check out the other lyrics now

[benjo]

hi well done jess

just tried again it will not open it just jumps
glad it's you though jess you deserve that tony...

[Dutchbeat]

great lyrics all around!

i just voted, i hope other forumites will also send their vote to Seriousfun

[Peppermint]

Very hard choice but i eventually choose one 

[S.T.C]

I will have a look tomorrow ,,sort of forgot about this/