[diademgrove]

Hi All,

I wrote this at the weekend. I have no musical ideas to go with it. I work slowly and it will take me a couple of months, at least, to think about pulling it into some short of shape. If anybody would like to take the words away and do something with them please be my guest. The song has no title. There is only one rule, please don't ask me what they mean. Other than this simple rule you can do anything with the words, change them, add to them etc etc.

I hear the red sky in the rain
I feel the rainbow in the wind
I see the thunder in the trees
My true love rides the breeze

I hear the paint on the wall
I feel the air of centuries past
I see the east wind on my face
My true love sleeps in grace

The man in the suit
Says he's tough
Little John in reverse
Slips money from her purse
Yes, that's right
Oh, so tough

I hear the moan in the breeze
I feel the heat in the rain
I see his head in her hand
Yes, she's my one true love..............
my one true love

If you do take them away to work on them please let me know.

Thanks,

diadem

[hardtwistmusic]

Hi All,

I wrote this at the weekend. I have no musical ideas to go with it. I work slowly and it will take me a couple of months, at least, to think about pulling it into some short of shape. If anybody would like to take the words away and do something with them please be my guest. The song has no title. There is only one rule, please don't ask me what they mean. Other than this simple rule you can do anything with the words, change them, add to them etc etc.

I hear the red sky in the rain
I feel the rainbow in the wind
I see the thunder in the trees
My true love rides the breeze

I hear the paint on the wall
I feel the air of centuries past
I see the east wind on my face
My true love sleeps in grace

The man in the suit
Says he's tough
Little John in reverse
Slips money from her purse
Yes, that's right
Oh, so tough

I hear the moan in the breeze
I feel the heat in the rain
I see his head in her hand
Yes, she's my one true love..............
my one true love

If you do take them away to work on them please let me know.

Thanks,

diadem

No guarantees, but I'll cut and paste your lyrics, and if something I think is worthy comes to me, I'll throw some music onto it.  Be forewarned, any musical accompaniment I write is going to be incomplete and poorly produced.  Really just a musical beat/foundation to hang the lyric on. 

Until I hear from you that you're okay with that, I'll do nothing.

[diademgrove]

Hi hardtwistmusic,

sorry you're a touch too late.

I received an offer from another board and with the help of Digger from this board we created Cynestasia.

Here's the link to the posting on this forum.

http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/song-reviews/cynestasia-(collaboration-with-frances-and-digger)/

Thanks for the thought, its appreciated.

diadem

[hardtwistmusic]

Hi hardtwistmusic,

sorry you're a touch too late.

I received an offer from another board and with the help of Digger from this board we created Cynestasia.

Here's the link to the posting on this forum.

http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/song-reviews/cynestasia-(collaboration-with-frances-and-digger)/

Thanks for the thought, its appreciated.

diadem

Not a problem..   Glad you found someone.

[diademgrove]

Not a problem..   Glad you found someone.
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Thanks again for the offer. I'm glad Frances came to my rescue. She brought a lot of good things to my lyrics and without her it wouldn't have happened. Digger kindly said yes when we'd got the basic structure down and I asked if he would sing.