hello again
New to writing songs, this is a song I wrote about my dad who died when I was 13, he died of cancer and when he died he was still warm because cancer dies a few hours after, I included that to explain one of my lyrics. this is a song about cancer, I think I could try make the verses longer? and would love help on wording and layout
thanks and hope u like it
Jamesba
verse.
Being woke as a little boy
ready to have my world destroyed
feeling the killer still alive inside
should of been him that lived
and that disease that died
an emotional terrorist to those alive
chorus.
im looking into your eyes and I cant see a thing
im touching you.. mmm I can t feel a thing
as I look at the parting blue sky I whisper you goodbye
as I look at the parting blue sky I watch you arrive
verse.
black car speeches and crying for hours
family, friends dropping flowers
wooden box now a bed for eternal rest
killed by the internal pest
chorus.
im looking into your eyes and I cant see a thing
im touching you.. mmm I can t feel a thing
as I look at the parting blue sky I whisper you goodbye
as I look at the parting blue sky I watch you arrive
verse.
to those who are suffering ill tell you something
as low as you have been your never nothing - not to sure about these two
we are going to kill it, its a matter of time
all that's left is the zodiac sign
chorus.
im looking into your eyes and I cant see a thing
im touching you.. mmm I can t feel a thing
as I look at the parting blue sky I whisper you goodbye
as I look at the parting blue sky I watch you arrive