[Alan Starkie]

Some good catchy parts in this song but I'm not liking the acoustic sound you have at the moment.

It sounds too effected and not natural. The room reverb you have on it is separating it from the rest of the song. Is lose the chorus and mike it instead.

That's my only gripe. Otherwise, great!

[basshead]

hi gf really liked song usual good lyrics and great melody ( becoming a shiny thang trademark ) only 2 things for me i would agree it is a bit ploddy but have no idea at moment how to lift it and i'd back the chorus off a tad on the acoustic- but that's just my ears. another great song,mate.