" MOONLIGHT DRIFTER" ( country)

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KEVIN B

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« on: June 09, 2013, 11:22:51 AM »
hey yall, lol, i know country is not everyones cup of tea, but i love it.
this song "MOONLIGHT DRIFTER" is about a guy that has no roots, or home, so he justs drifts aroun from place to place, trying to find work, getting drunk, and playing his guitar contemplating his lonely life !
hope you all like it, enjoy
would be nice if someone out there would like to put music to it !!

I've drifted through most of my life
without any purpose, or direction
always making do with second best,
never looking for perfection.
so i wander around in this old truck
of mine,as i go from place to place,
nothing of value to call my own
and nowhere that i call home !
(chorus)
      i am the moonlight drifter, i roam
      around from town to town,                     (repeat)
      i aint got no place that i call home
      so i just keep moving on
      so i just keep moving on !

i've tried this and that without success
things start off well, but often end in a mess,
so now and then i take to drinking
which often ends with a fight
or sometimes i'll take my loving
to a sweet lady of the night!

I love to sit under the stars at night
WITH MY guitar in my hand
singing songs no one will ever hear,or even
understand.some songs about the future
some about my past, recalling
memories of times gone by, wondering which
one will be my last !
(chorus)
      I am the moonlight drifter, i roam
      around from town to town
      i aint got no place that i call home
      so i just keep moving on
      so i just keep moving on.

Well sometimes i get lonely thinking
about the struggles that lay ahead
so i'll crack open another bottle of jack,
and find somewhere to rest my head.
then i wake in the morning, looking
like the  devil, and smelling like an
old black bear, no money in my pocket,
no food in my belly, and nothin but
dust in my hair!!

i know a pretty little girl in
NASHVILLE, i go there once in a while
she cleans me up, and takes care of me
and she does it all with a smile,
she asks me to stay but she knows
deep inside, that drifting's in my blood
so after a couple of days, i'm back
on the road, i stayed as long as i could. !!!
(chorus)
      I am the moonlight drifter, i roam
      around from town to town
      i aint got no place that i call home
      so i just keep moving on
      put on my shades, dust myself down
      and just keep moving on
      its a lonely life sometimes, but it's all
      i know, so i just keep moving on. !!!!!



written by kevin bowdler.    (c)

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« Reply #1 on: June 09, 2013, 04:21:24 PM »
I would love to hear this. I've recently fallen in love with country music and it's becoming something I've started to write more of.

I really like this song. Flows very well and in my head I could definitely see it being a country piece of music.
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KEVIN B

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« Reply #2 on: June 09, 2013, 05:20:40 PM »
Hey booboo, yeh i love it too, its still a huge market, and the only one that is growing, especially now with all the country/pop cross over stuff out there, taylor swift, lady antobellam, etc, but its hard to get someone in the uk to record a really good authentic country track, but glad u like it  8) keep an eye out on here and i will post more country tracks for you !!
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« Reply #3 on: June 09, 2013, 05:32:14 PM »
Wandering around,drinking beer and playing guitar...sounds like my life :D

well done Kev........just need someone to play it.

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« Reply #4 on: June 09, 2013, 05:40:39 PM »
not far off mine either, you can have a stab at it if u wanna ! glad you like it. 8)

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« Reply #6 on: June 14, 2013, 11:14:21 AM »
Strong country feel for sure. Might be tad long at 5 verses. IMHO i would look at condensing so that it could be brought in under 4 mins. Just my 2 cents worth.

KEVIN B

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« Reply #7 on: June 14, 2013, 04:17:59 PM »
yeh was thinking that, but the hook is not that long, so wanted to get it all in, to tell the whole story, but i know what you mean, might drag it on a bit, into four n a half min maybe, but i really like this one ! lol, got other country songs that are not so long, i'll post them soon, i take it you are from state side ?

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« Reply #8 on: June 14, 2013, 04:21:14 PM »
Hi, this looks like a classic country song and well written too, though I agree with seriousfun that it may turn out to be a bit long.  I'd volunteer for the music but I'm not much of a finger picker and you definitely wouldn't want my voice on it :-S
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« Reply #9 on: June 14, 2013, 11:11:52 PM »
I am from NZ but i do write a lot of country. Even when i try to writesomethibg else it still seems to sound country. Must be my voice lol.