These are the lyrics to a song I'm working on at the moment. I've never posted asking for feedback before, so I hope this is the place to do it.
I dare you to out in the middle of the night,
When the owls are hootin’ and the sky’s dark blue,
When safety of sight is a vague memory,
When nobody’s around to judge what you do
Faced with the shadows of a long distant foe
From the beginning of time we’ve all feared the fight,
With no more than a torch and wearing nothing but clothes,
I dare you to go out in the middle of the night
And it’s cold, it’s cold, it’s cold!
I dare you to go out in the middle of the night,
When your legs get tangled with thistles and thorns,
When fellow villagers hide in their homes
When you’re freezing cold, while their nice ‘n warm
Faced with the shadows of a long distant foe
From the beginning of time we’ve all feared the fight,
With no more than a torch and wearing nothing but clothes,
I dare you to go out in the middle of the night
And it’s cold, it’s cold, it’s cold!
I dare you to go out in the middle of the night,
When you worry you’ll tread on the honey bee’s hive,
When you sing to yourself now the birds have all ceased,
When you think about death even though you’re alive
Faced with the shadows of a long distant foe
From the beginning of time we’ve all feared the fight,
With no more than a torch and wearing nothing but clothes,
I dare you to go out in the middle of the night
And it’s cold, it’s cold, it’s cold!
I dare you to out in the middle of the night,
When the moon shows his face and the sun’s gone away,
When each crack of a stick makes you jump up with fright,
When all you want is to see the next day
Faced with the shadows of a long distant foe
From the beginning of time we’ve all feared the fight,
With no more than a torch and wearing nothing but clothes,
I dare you to go out in the middle of the night
And it’s cold, it’s cold, it’s cold!