Hi guys,
I thought i'd post this as my first song on here. It's about 6 months old and Im not quite complete with it, but I don't know where to take it.
The song is called severance and is about a breakdown in friendships from mid last year. I was in a band with a friend and his fiancé as well as a few other folk. Over time in that band the tension got pants based largely on it becoming very much a "them and us" kind of thing where you couldn't yell boo without getting her in tears and by October 2011, we disbanded the band for a few months (realistically it was the end then tho and I knew it). I could tell if we kept going it was going to explode and cause alot of collateral damage.
Anyway, mid last year, we hadn't caught up all that much - life, jobs and general mayhem got in the way and they never contacted me or close friends ever regardless of the number of reach-outs to them but we saw them last early summer and the next day the gates of hell & Mordor and mount vesuvius itself could have opened/erupted up and caused less devastation. The fiancé started crazy shenanigans which tore alot of friendships up and I cut them out after that.
This song was my goodbye to them. It's mostly an acoustic track with a wee noodle at the end. I don't know what I was doing with my vox, I guess I was pissed at them to go all grunty haha!
I'll link my dropbox acc here:
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/83213778/Severance/17%20Severance.m4aI'd love to hear thoughts on everything from you guys.
Acoustic tuning - Low-CGCGCC-High
LYRICS:
I'm, done with you tonight
You've burned your bridge and
Run Away
I gave you all I could
But you wanted more
Now the walls are falling
For all to see
The madness that has swallowed me
Now I must go
And take my leave
You've drained the life from me
So please don't play those games again
I’ve seen them played a 1000 times
I wish you all the best, I do
But I can't take you any more
I lie awake at night
Could I have done much more
I guess it was bound to pass
This fate was assured
Now the walls are falling
For all to see
The madness that has swallowed me
Now I must go
And take my leave
You've drained the life from me
So please don't play those games again
I’ve seen them played a 1000 times
I wish you all the best, I do
But I can't take you any more
So goodbye
I leave you
In the rear view
No longer will
I let myself
Be governed by your whims
I've got my life
You've got yours
Now let us part as weary souls
And start our lives again