This is one is not strictly a work in progress being 99% of the way finished but I am open for any minor tweaking that gets suggested. Its the story of a guy who falls for a working girl on the poor side of town and is trying to keep his interest in her under the radar.
Thanks for listening and any comments you make like to offer.
https://soundcloud.com/allan-kilgour/on-the-poor-side************************************************************
This work is now completed and I have made a lot of changes. Almost a complete lyric rewrite which went from first person to third person. Gave it a better story line and took away the whorehouse references to make it more acceptable for a singer to use.
Reduced the number of guitar riffs to shorten the song to under 4 mins and to allow the chorus to arrive earlier. Add some riffs to the outro to spice it up a little. Tightened up all the harmonies and fixed a few vocal issues I wasn't happy with. Have replaced the lyrics posted and the audio on soundcloud has been updated as well.
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On The Poor Side
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Walkin’ in the shadows hat pulled low
Just try to remain incognito
Gonna be home late tonight
He’s Gotta a new gal and shes a sight
She wants to show him off to her kin
But he don’t like the poverty and the sin
He can’t take her home to his folks
Just can’t abide the endless jibes and jokes
Chorus
Spending all his night, On the poor side
Pay a dollar for her loving touch
Spending all his night, On the poor side
another dollar cant get enough
He’s spending his night, On the poor side
Smooth as silk yet shes sleepin rough
Spending all his night, On the poor side
Spending all his night, On the poor side
He gotta love her from across the way
And this is the way it has to stay
Long distance love don’t amount to much
Not without the feel of a lover’s touch
Repeat chorus
He’s lovin’ his gal over in the poor side
He’s lovin’ his gal no one to confide
He’s lovin’ his gal over on the poor side
He’s lovin’ his gal and no one knows oh yeah
He’s lovin’ his gal over in the poor side
He’s lovin’ his gal no one to confide