Hey guy,
please give me some feedback on my new song Diogenes
https://soundcloud.com/shivering-sand/diogenesDiogenes
step down from your cloud and light my way once more
are those hindrance? or are those signs i cant read?
pictures of read shadows are tricking my eyes?
does it really matter what you see when you are blind inside?
im falling through blue windows i...
fetch me up on the other side
what if?what if? oh nevermind
could i?could I? nono step aside!
well, whos the one in charge? is this freedom? maybe i went to far...
stitches of red needles are sewing my eyes
does it really matter what you see when you are blind inside?
im falling through blue windows i
fetch me up on the other side
oh look its there oh no just a trap?
oh mind if i? nono step aside.