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ENTRY SUMMER SONG COMP "Summertime"

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fischermans

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« on: April 26, 2013, 03:01:38 PM »
Hello all
Here is my solo entry for the summer song competition.
Hope you like it.
https://soundcloud.com/a-fisch-1/summertime
Here are the lyrics
Summertime
1) First sun in springtime
When everything is looking fine
And all the flowers bring back the colors in my live
Summertime
I feel fine
And it seems I will be happy for the rest of my life        
2) Summertime is gone
And everything so grey
But your love is still strong and true
Waiting again
For the sun in the spring
Because your love is forever mine
3) First sun in springtime
When everything is looking fine
And we are still together since a long time
Summertime, your love is mine
Summertime, your love is forever mine
Forever mine forever mine forever mine
forever summertime
Alexander
« Last Edit: April 28, 2013, 06:29:39 AM by fischermans »
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« Reply #1 on: April 27, 2013, 03:16:11 PM »
Hey Fischermans..


Lovely guitar work, great clarity on the recording, nicely produced as well.

I can hear that German accent in there, very cool :) I love to hear that. Great vocal as well.

Great song sir, really really nice.

The competition is really hotting up!!

hab..

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« Reply #2 on: April 28, 2013, 05:11:46 PM »
Hello Hab.
Many thanks for your friendly words. Hope the others forget to post a song. ;D
Regards Alexander
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« Reply #3 on: April 28, 2013, 05:35:12 PM »
Lovely, long. lazy summertime sounds there fischermans. You put yourself into the 'zone' for that one I think. Nice job :)
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« Reply #4 on: April 30, 2013, 11:51:17 PM »
Hello ShinyThang.
Thanks for your nice comment.
Regards Alexander
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« Reply #5 on: May 01, 2013, 04:29:49 PM »
Jazzy too
:) :)
Neil
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« Reply #6 on: May 02, 2013, 01:42:44 PM »
nice summer song, Fischermans!!!
 





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« Reply #7 on: May 03, 2013, 01:44:45 PM »
Hello Neil hello dutchbeat
Thank you both.
Alexander
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« Reply #8 on: May 05, 2013, 10:38:09 AM »
Hi Alexander  Enjoyed This song  Great Entry for competition  Nice lyrics & guitar Cheerzzz :)

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« Reply #9 on: May 07, 2013, 05:51:40 AM »
Hy Stylus
Thank you.If you agree we can do the vote right now.Not that many entry´s till now.Makes it easier. ;D
Alexander is kidding
« Last Edit: May 07, 2013, 08:46:56 PM by fischermans »
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« Reply #10 on: May 11, 2013, 10:04:27 PM »
I fully & totally  agree!  Alex Your entry Stands out amongst all enteries & has the right title to boot!
So .......I'm votin' right now this instance.....You're The man! You wrote The winning song & I am both proud & privilaged to know ya        ;D        Regards     Stylus  :)

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« Reply #11 on: May 11, 2013, 10:22:27 PM »
I fully & totally  agree!  Alex Your entry Stands out amongst all enteries & has the right title to boot!
So .......I'm votin' right now this instance.....You're The man! You wrote The winning song & I am both proud & privilaged to know ya        ;D        Regards     Stylus  :)

Thats fine Stylus
What is the price I have won? Is it a new car or a trip around the world?
Thank you and please tell the others that the competition is finished.  ;D
Alexander
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« Reply #12 on: May 18, 2013, 09:15:04 AM »
Wow, I am loving the chord progression here, and the relaxed single notes as well.
You've kind of got a Waikiki beach feeling going on here. If it were just a bit warmer at this time I'd immediately move the laptop to the balcony, get a cool drink and just lie back in the sun. So yeah, mission accomplished ;)

I'm finding it a bit hard to make out a distinct structure in the song and lyrics, but there are definitely memorable parts in the song. (I am guilty of always looking for the more or less standard verse-chorus-verse-bridge-chorus structure in songs I listen to),
And don't get me wrong, your song absolutely works the way it is :)

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« Reply #13 on: May 19, 2013, 10:34:27 PM »
@Michael
Thanks Michael.You are right there is not a distinct structure in the song but I thought why not try it this way.
Alexander
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