Hi,
This is a song I've been kicking around for a year trying to find a melody and approach to fit the lyrics and this is where I'm at. It's about a young guy who takes increasingly bigger risks starting at running red lights, gambling, getting chased by the police, dealing drugs and the inevitable end. His conscience chips in now and then but gets ignored.
I'm looking for feed back on the song quality and especially ideas for arrangement and instrumentation/approach. Please no comments about the subdued singing - it's meant to be quietly regretful and remorseful - it's not the bleeding Eurovision Song Contest!!
I hope you like it. BTW, it's the first time I've recorded an electric guitar and the first time I've experimented with a wammy bar to get that Twin Peaks sort of effect.
Thank you
Alan
https://soundcloud.com/alan-walker-4/jump-firstJump first and look later
It's a chance taken heartbreaker
Take a faith leap and don't think
Who'll be the first to blink
My new car is so hard to beat
Chromium lights on mean streets
Look Ma!, there's no hands
I'm headed for the badlands
Pink lipstick short dress
Will she? it's your guess
I got good cards bad deck
Bet it all, it's my neck
On a two lane, black top
Foot down won't stop
Blue lights flashing bright
Never seen a better sight
Don't waste my time
If your gonna be a friend of mine and
Try to find a way soon
To pull this boy from his doom
To pull this boy from his doom
In your dreams it goes right
A better high everynight
You don't have to pay
For everything you did today
It's short term with no plan
And I don't give a damn
There's no wife and no kids
Just highs and lows with no mids
The last deal has gone bad
Lost everything I had
There's no time I can't wait
Better believe it's too late
Gut shot and my blood
Making red drops in the mud
What a short life lived fast
Had a great script but a bad cast
It was a good start but a sad end
Some rules just won't bend
So I'll see you someday
There's nothing more to say