[Sellon]

just a quick one from about 2 months ago, it's sorta about arguements and how people annoy you and you do stupid things but then realize you're stupid


When I breathe, I breathe in nitrogen
When I think too much I'm up all night again
In, out, carbon monoxide lullaby
In, out, in, out, just like you and I

Well I hope you've heard the news
I took off my shoes
Im not walking away
So if you can still hear me
I want you near me
I'm here to stay
I'm here to stay

My body goes though changes the more I think, chemical disaster has bought me to the brink
The more I think the more I drink
Sit down, relax, stand up again
Hold my breath count back to ten
Sit down, relax and repeat
But how can I relax with all this fire at my feet?

I'm not done yet
Cause I'm still not afraid
I never really have been
I think the thing that really scares me are the mistakes I've made

Well I hope you've heard the news
I took off my shoes
Im not walking away
So if you can still hear me
I want you near me
I'm here to stay
I'm here to stay

I'm not done yet
Cause I'm still not afraid
I never really have been
I think the thing that really scares me are the mistakes I've made
And the prices I have paid
They still haunt me to this day

[GTB]

Oh I really like this, flows very well and I love the line about 'fire around my feet'.  I don't know what style you have in mind but it made me think Foo Fighters.
cheers, Graham

[Dead Weight]

Hello Sellon,

This is class.  Love the lines: Sit down, relax, stand up again, Hold my breath, count back to ten.

Like the way you write around the issue, without jumping straight in.  This adds to the quality.

To me the lyrical approach is a bit Coldplay-esque.

Another solid write. 

[benjo]

 hi sellon,

 fresh good flowing kept me to the end
 i liked the use of nitrogen
 thanks for sharing it good luck...