do it again

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darreldo

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« on: May 13, 2013, 09:22:09 AM »
New song that i started last night, i recorded it as i went along.
I have only wrote a verse and a chorus and put my guitar down as it was getting abit late.
Its as rough as it comes, i havent tried to sing or play properly. i just got the odea down whilst i could and whilst i was flowing.
I have strummed the chords but was thinking of maybe stabbing the chords, shame it was late otherwise i would have made 2 different versions.
Im going to have a sit down throughout the week and try get this wrote.

verse Confusion reigns over in my head,
        Like a passing night back from the dead,
        i can't see and i don't know my friend,
        is this real or is this just the end?

chorus.. yeeeaahh do it over again,
            yeeeaaahhh do it all again?

https://soundcloud.com/darrel-mcgibbon/new-guitar-song

Neil C

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« Reply #1 on: May 15, 2013, 10:39:13 AM »
Worth completing as the verse and chorus have something with that lilting rhythm and guitar backing. :)
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« Reply #2 on: May 17, 2013, 01:01:05 AM »
Sorry Darrel, I tried to listen to this but he link didn't take me anywhere. I'll try again later.

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« Reply #3 on: May 17, 2013, 02:04:09 PM »
Same here I'm afraid, the link is broken :(